Atom vs Северсталь.(battle in eng)
 

I contend that this bitch is so full of shit,
diarrhea's the only flow that he'll get,
I'ma rename this dickless emcee,
can't cure shit, just puts me to sleep//
I'll bet he counts sheep when he lay down his head,
I don't even mean the ones in his bed,
he's dead, killed by an proper emcee,
squashed like a beetle for needlin' me//
stop, how much heat can I legally be ?
your scheme too weak for an eagle to see,
I'm lethal with an easel,
pour diesel on this weasel then light him up in the sequel//
oh wait, the script says you won't make it back\
but your ass will be cast in Return of the Wack//

o.k that was ma shit,, it ur turn now...

winner is the one who'll get 5 votes...ight.. all fare? i think so...

good luck
:)

Well, I'm here not to be original. I'm here to rock!!!
 

I won't wait until tomorrow, for your rhymes put me in sorrow...

I just have to repeat one my worse with a bit of changes
It suits you much better than guy I addresed it last time...

When I fight it is right I take flight
An insight into your life, like a knife
Cutting you, and you bleed and you need
To smoke weed, but you're greed
And won't share; it's your nightmare
I'll make you heart live apart from you
And I chew a gum and your brain too;
You should find any kind of defense,
You have no chance, I will dance
On your grave; I am brave, you are slave
I keep faith, year by year you're still nine
And now it's time for you to get mine.

How is this shit guys? :))))))

2 Atom
 

You know man I have much business tomorrow...
I'm going to Moscow the next day, but tomorrow I'll be back!!
And then it'll be the shakedown time!!

man,, u can't even freestyle...lol.. repeatin shit...lol

thats why i shouldn't wast ma time..

it took ya 2o min to repeat ur shit....lol :D

ight...that was funny....

by the way,, it's gay that u voted for ur self..and the other gizza it's maxali,,, coz he hate me...lol fuck guys u r funny fucks.

Severstal' v nakaute

NO MORE REPEATED!!
 

You rhymes - silly action, stupid collection
Why have you pronounced this election?
This is my reflection. I'm the perfection
My word is brutality, I take it to reality
This battle is your fatality, nothing personal,
No spirituality. You make your verse oral
How long should I wait for finality? No moral
My rhymes full of emotion, Father devotion,
Grenades explosion, devilish motion;
I'm here on a vacation, saving my nation
English decay - fuck away! Conversation
With you is boring. Somebody needs translation?
You're listening to SeverStal rap FM station.

I voted for myself cuz I thought you did it too!!!

man,, as i said 20 line no more..... can u play ur cards right?? no!

ur last post don't matter....actually i don't care..

u r funny....lol

You mean JUST ONE REPLY OF 20 LINES?? Why do you think that you're the judge! You say 20 lines - I don't give a fuck. I know why you said so - cuz' you have nothing more to answer, you coward

"You're scared to death and scared to look, you shook"

Anyway I will write this::

I'm in rage, I'll shoot ya from long range
It's not strange, I'm on the stage, ya're in cage
My gunshots make the heat, feel my beat
I know your seat is wet; you're just a cat
Or even fuckin little rat dead by the bat
If you're against me, you're against the world
Your words are offended, ya brain isn't mended
I'm highly defended, I'm in the pure absolution
This is your conclusion, now I'm to send it.

Примерный перевод: Атом, иди на хер со своими правилами. Тебе просто нечего сказать, ты еле-еле выдавил из себя одну несчастную строфу, да и то плюшево. С чего ты взял, что ты устанавливаешь правила. Судит-то здесь народ, а не ты!!!

why why,, coz otherwize this shit will have no end,,
u tried to battle me? well there u go,,
i said it clearly 20 lines is the max 5 votes is the winner....
i ain't no judge..people r...

ps u gota play by the rules or u loose...sorry kid but that's how it is!!

Чтоб спокойно заснуть...
 

Окей, но напоследок. В принципе, можешь это не учитывать, пусть будет как интерлюдия... :)))

I face you with grin, for you are just mean
You're my worst sin, of cause I gonna win
So bitch don't piss me off, you have no odd
Your lyrics are cold, mine are hot, ya ass is sold
Mine is not; I'll harm you, if ya're not calm
Ya're a fly on my palm, so please surrender
Or your death won't be too tender...

I'm gonna get tired of this motherfucker...

НУ ВСЕ!!!

Северсталь: играй лучше в футбол.

Atom13th: Флэшит. Отлично сработано, то бишь так, что читая текст, слышишь, каким бы он был в живой баталии. Тем не менее, я не вижу особого смысла в напечатанном бэттле, тем более по англицки на русском форуме - в интернете существует масса англоязычных бэттл-бордов, и там тебе будет намного сложнее убрать противника, чем в избиении этого бедного младенца.
Думаю, надо будет как-нибудь встретиться, как вернусь в Королевство. Ты лондонского dj urbanite знаешь?

siba za otziv....

dj'ya ya ne znau zato vadima lichno,,,na schet vstretica eto po lubomu nado....i nado bilo..

rus bukv nema na klave a eto prosto praktika shtob ne datj sebe zasoxnutj.

peace
:)

shit i've made a mistake with votin system in this thread,,
ma falt,, but yo u can still read...
:)

Отличный бэттл.Атом - 10 баллов.

siba man...

<3> to <1> so far...

:)

Хороший бэттл, без лишних распальцовок и выплеснутого дерьма...
Мой голос за Северсталя... Обьясню почему...
Atom13th живет в Британии и знает английский как свои 21 палец... Братуха, а слабо слазить на http://forums.b-boys.com/ и потягаться с реальным нигером, который на английском cuss'ит с самого рождения? ;-) Мы с интересом посмотрим на эту битву.

Северсталь же - из Казани, но, признаю, английский язык пожалуй знает лучше меня, хоть я и вроде как штатовский...:D Вот это меня удивило и заставило выставить respect ему... текстяра у него кстати очень приличная.

P.S.: Обои неплохо рифмуют, опять же баттл удался.

this shit that y'all got is simply genetic,
not only you were born with hip-hop kinetic,
no matter how good you put your words right,
it's all about the meaning, don't act like a fright,
i got lil' something to add at the end,
this shit aint no battle, it's just a bad thread.

~peace out.

Rich ti kak rebenok,,, esli vi znaete shto ya luchshe kak ti skazali,, kakogo xera vistupatj i govoritj mol shto ti govno ili tam poslednyaya dranaya suka,,, i vse pitatca pereubeditj....?

net, mne ne slabo tam battlica,, no ti dolzhen ponyatj shto takix kak mi ( russkix za granicoy ) zdesj mnogo,,, i mnogo iz nix oxerenno chitaut ili pishut, po luchshe dazhe chem nekotorie tvoi niggeri.... tak shto esli ti chustvuesh sili battlica protiv menya to pozhalusta,,no potom ne govori shto eto ne chesno bilo potomu shto ya tam zhivu i znau angl luchshe... nauchisj proigrivatj s dostoinstvom.

siba...

thuglifer
i got ur point.

:)

2 Atom
 

Может, ты еще скажешь, что ТЫ читаешь лучше знакомых тебе нигерских рэпперов???

nu i k chemu ti eto skazal???

durachok.
:)

А сказал я это к тому, что ты, по-моему, слишком много о себе думаешь.
Нужно всегда уважать своего противника, это относится не только ко мне.

po moemu ti ponyatiya ne imeesh shto ya dumau....i eto fakt.

pozhalusta ne uchi menya,, ya uvazhau svoix protivnikov a ne nenavizhu..... votlichii ot vas..(chuvakov)

peace te chuvak...

<3> to <2> so far...

fuck it i didnt even read the whole thing, this whole thing is bullshit..... the lines are short, theres no wordplay and metaphorically related punchlines which could somehow make an influence,,,, bullshit :rolleyes: