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ETB#2-R#2 - Texts and Scores Kormega This word war as tough as the World War Was bored last round but now it has gone Opponent in front of, wanna front on Me, whose mind spreads over horizonts Of human consciousness, bitch, it's on One entrance but even less exists an no one Is good, know what I mean, Steello a.k.a. What? Marowjak? U ride the wrong way Your swagger is fake and your style is gay U r jerk, but u ain't tough in any case Barkin out loud like a dog on a chain Couple of rhymes and u will humbly pass by Don't u know, luck just told u "good-bye" Like snowing in Crimea my losts are rare U rhyming? Verbal diarea, I don't care I was told to be responsible for the title I wear Writin shit on a paper, or holding the mic Or busting the gat...doesn't matter - I'm tight I'm flowin better than your favourite MC I'll own u like Nas once did with Jay-Z And in the evening, watchin sunset over the sea I'm sittin calmly, rollin a blunt, tryna foresee What the next day will bring, wearing NYC Cap which cover my eyes I'm blueprintin To rule the world, Marowak, do you hear it? I don't give a fuck bout yo poor existin I'm on a way higher level than dissin... Just another pseudo-rhymer on my way to the top Click-click, bang-bang, body drops, time is up. Mozzy Oh heck! Unexpectedly Feels like I HAVE to Dumb down for my ref Just to double my ratings When I rhyme too sublimely There’s no understanding So screw the similes, the fanciness And consonant cadences And whatever the fuck I see As extended-ass harmonies Since the ref’s unimpressed anyway Got my word-plays? Naw, hardly The florid rhetoric can visit the rectum Dear ref, guess you lack the ref-Lexes Of rhyme, it is my place To expand on the texts Of the round gone None (but one) went beyond Haughty statements at best Representing? My ass! Here’s some tough for ya, dwarf: It’s my dick And remember: Stay sitting while eating it So hey, just say “WOW” Now, how’s that for some spitting? The reality sucks, bro It’s not really Dun Morogh You’ve been done for a low whore Battle who? This M Dwella?! Good joke. He’s jerky at best, like an arm of the clock Tick-tock, tick-tock, Mozzy’s +Ready To Rock+ Like The Dwellas, don’t mock up the shock It is my time to shine Yours is clouds and umbrellas – It rains cats and dogs Let’s just one-up on sonnovabitches You’re a runner-up, nano-second-long glitch (There I go again, too smart for my own good I’m like Batman, no robbin’ in my ‘hood) Quit preaching with garbled speeches No subject, just random bitching The way you handled the round before You pose zero danger Go back and learn more No jeopardy, just “pardon me, that’s your jaw And that’s the knuckles that did you all raw” Browbeating the shit outta ya, feller Dear Dwella, I hope for your best shot The what-not you first wrote Is stuff for a piss-pot ROCCA Diss on Demise. Round 2 Aight yo.... ************************* Chores x2******************************* Ayo who's dat, bitch dirty talkin?... *Toooough Jerky!* Ayo who's dat bitch, actin the block king? *Toooough jerky!* Ayo who's dat T.H.U to da motha fuckin G? *Tooough Jerky!* Ayo who's dat ho tradin his ass down the street?! *Tooough jerky!* ************************************************** ************* Dogg , what tha fuck is this, this shit is nonsense! Since when, bitch u are, tradin that ass on my streets? Fagget with the red lipstick on his lips 'n naked hips! Smokin 20 inches of a dick for tips, 25c. fo' a fist sex! Dirty ass bitch, dressed in the black tightening latex! Various items fo sex, that shits hilarious A single look at yo nasty limbs, gives me creeps, man Or wait, should I call you WOman instead? (My bad!) Laid by a fat dork n chained to bed, beggin on yo knees fo a slap! fuckin Braveheart, shittin words from the other side of tha planet Misused ever since the childhood, yo life has been fucked up fo good and even that my main job is grindin the rappers in the game I ll pimp yo bitch ass fo gain, in the name of Benjamin s! Yo workin at ma street 24/7, with face of a nighmare, who'd ever bone u , daym! Heard what did Simon said? Shut tha fuck up n smoke dat trick Man yo shit aint rap, my shit is thick, foo drop the mic n grab a dick! Zap yo trap motha fucka, don t make me pop dat click I ll cut yo fuckin throat, from ear to ear, like Italian Tie! Watch my ride, rollin down yo hood, goin drive by! Foo, Remain silence in my sight, if yo aint ready to die Coz it takes only 1 shot to end yo life, n berry remains on my back yard! Bitch already talk less, yo r an ass gas, somebody pass me a gasmask! I got my task done, I laid yo punk ass down in the second round Somebody call for Lessy, to carry that shit out, this battle is now less crowded! *********************** Chores x2***************************** Ayo who's dat, bitch dirty talkin?... *Toooough Jerky!* Ayo who's dat bitch, actin the block king? *Toooough jerky!* Ayo who's dat T.H.U to da motha fuckin G? *Tooough Jerky!* Ayo who's dat ho tradin his ass down the street?! *Tooough jerky!* ************************************************** Demise I'm hype and wielding-cognizance of incredible-skills Unlike Rocca who's hyper-tensed and yielding to my vibes of impervious-thrills Didn't have nada against the boy fore he started flaunting n brandished that toy pistol Bitch-slap you so hard Queen, your pussy-ass will-jet from Copenhagen to Bristol Rocca, I don't give a shit you be pimp or a player When you pass through my block, you had better learn some of the prayers You tough jerky? You punk ass just perky, I've been lurking And got insight into your life, like paparazzi I need to expose some-lies You got some ties and you wyling boy cuzz you moved to Copenhagen tough You're FAKE-capitalized, fled your motherland, quit e-barking from abroad I know you're bluff You rough, you get rougher at you sister when you keep misspelling them words Claiming you lazy, I know you failed your school cuzz you folks kept on the bottle and you lived too far in the burbs You got expelled, quelled, your name misspelt and you walked to the streets naked bare You could no longer fake it cuzz you and alike are bloodsuckers keeping cushy with no job on the State welfare Keep your soap bubble for retards, you're about to bust, your head full of rubble No one wants a trouble from Rocca who's about to land his mug right into the dust Diss-you lyrically, cripple you into mental-starvation Throw you backwards-physically, twist your neck till they pronounce your complete-annihilation "This country too hard n I+" quit fishing for lame excuses, you ain't Russian bitch, keep the word out of your mouth, species like you are in detrimental-niche Incidental to the rowdyism in Estonia to dismantle our memorial voicing a "monumental" speech Yeah this country is too rough for you cuzz it won't help those betraying Fuck you punk, keep yappin at 'Hagen cuzz you don't know what type of games we're playing Maryachi I've got the mic I was weak in the previous round,look,now I got you as high as I kite And I'm feeling really aight You think,that I am easy pray To make your rapping betta take a beat from Dr.Dre Get out the way,or your family will learn the story of Max Payne Hey,Hommie,you still wanna know me? It seems to me that you hope to get the winning But I don't give a fuck,it's my first battle,and don't care what is your opinion They say the more you know,the earlier you're becoming old It's obvious that you are very young Next time make up some better shit,while taking pencil in your arm You gonna see me teaching? My granny did it,now her copse is in your kitchen. If you wanna kill me,than you need thousands of swords But I'ma dodge,and finish you with one of my motherfucking words Is my style as simple as a bird? You'd better be behind me,cause I'm acting blindly Look,my brain's out of order I've been Mariachy since I was swimming in water I'll have your mama picking out your casket,bastard You're on the wrong level,right lane,forget bezzle Benz pedal to the metal,hotter than a tea kettle You are wacker than the faggot you bit you style from You ain't gonna sell two copies if you press a double album You wanna money,you should be cun to work it But at the moment you are nothing but tough jerky |
Maryachi Comparatively poor rhymes, nevertheless: Rhymes - 6/10 Plot - 7/10 Impression - 7/10 "Hommie - know me?" I've used this even rhyme last year, so +1 to impression Mozzy And THAT was the real tough jerky! Good vocabulary and pretty complicated structure. The best text of the round, and the highest scores. Rhymes - 10/10 Plot - 10/10 Impression - 10/10 Kormega Just a bit less interesting text than the one from Moz. Rhymes - 9/10 Plot - 8/10 Impression - 10/10 ROCCA You've really impressed me, good job! Rhymes - 9/10 Plot - 9/10 Impression - 10/10 Demise. Um...DISSappointing Rhymes - 8/10 Plot - 7/10 Impression - 7/10 |
well well well...it is not a big surprise to me AT ALL....:morj: Given lex's understanding of battling concept, ability to construe twisted metaphors and PUN's interwoven with his "deep" insight into the English language generally says it ALL :D :D :D :saint: |
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I got my task done, I laid yo punk ass down in the second round Somebody call for Lessy, to carry that shit out, this battle is now less crowded! Lay low... fishy.... |
Lex, was my guess of the origin of the topic-word-combination correct? ;) |
Demise, man, it's not a prose contest, it's battle rhymin' Unfortunately I ain't see any cadences here (except of the ends of yo long-ass lines), it's hard to read and hard to realize as well, sorry |
А че Хомми не успел? Бля обидно, парень на уровне, мож сделаем исключение? |
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Sorry, guys, I had some biz to do... http://hip-hop.ru/forum/showthread.php?p=1061667385#post1061667385 |
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