Я новичок, и у нас с другом есть группа. Вот несколько текстов, которые я сочинил втечение месяца. Болшой респект вам, если зацените и сделаете свои комментарии и замечания.
[BGD].text
Hell. Is my holiday destination.
solitude - This is my discrimination.
I'm a social outcast in my own world.
My life in this - is the fucken twirld
Shit - the way, which my life is goin'.
I howl on the moon. My feelings is growin'.
This is survival. And we live, as in jungle.
Someone is lucky. And he is spungle.
But what about me? I'm gust a BlackguArd.
Now just remember me. Cause I am discard.
Only thing dat I've got, is the rhymes.
And only it helps me not become to die.
Can.
U.
Be like me.
Like a rubbish.
Up degree or down degree.
Always betrayed or never betrayed.
Always evaded or never evade.
My childhood is difficult. Always humiliated.
Positive, or negative? It's not arbitrated.
Look in my eyes. U cannot understand.
All my feelings sometime became the sand.
Cause my lifestyle just ony bout one.
U holdin' the knife? I'm holdin' the gun.
This is the fightin' of different weight.
And chess. After one shahe will be a mate.
Any fuckin band can simly kill ME(ударение на E).
My body - is corpse, my spirit can breath.
Cnock down my mind - incorrectly way.
How you will hit me, I allways keep stayn'
(припев)
U always thing, that u got all.
But u late on big piece, now get more small.
Not all in the life allowed so simple.
Not all in the world is just a lil pimple.
The current mode of typical blackguard -
Eyes are deciet and look is hard.
Cause I understand our blind life.
The God is whom, just who could survive.
But I'm not He. I'm just a BG.
Just After Five Minutes U Will Forget Me.
(припев)2x
[Forget Me].text(А вот это жесть! у меня в тот день, когда я сочинял, мобилу отбрали.
Blacguard:
Forget me. I'm a man who leave life again.
I fill a pain. I'm goin' 2 my butcher through the bloody rain.
He is waitin' me, I'm gonna die. I don't know why.
But it is late to survive.
Nobody cryin'. Nobody sympathize. Cause anyone know, dat fucken bustard is dyin'.
And they don't know, how this feeling is trying.
But I know, how was fucked my stupid life...
AND WHAT DO U LOOKIN AT ME, STUPID FUCKA??? DO U THINK DAT U LOOKIN' A STEEP,
BITCH, HOG SUCKER!
I HATE U!!! AND U MUST MUST FORGET ME, IF U DON'T WANNA DIIIIEEEE!
I'M ANGRY.
FUCKED UP!
My flat is a nich.
FUCKED UP!
My life is a shit.
FUCKED UP!
My world is a hell.
FUCKED UP!
My girl is a bitch.
What da fuck u lookin' at?
Fuckers:
SUCKER! WHAT U SAY TO US???What did you say?
Blacguard:
I smell a deAth. Now get out of my way!
Incisive knife coming through my brain, my life is going in such way:
my always betray, But I will survive - this is my steady remain.
body in blood. Stand up and do it again!
My charachter is buryed, shoes in fuckin' shit, face in the scars, and eyes are deceit.
I'm lookin' on my victim with a glassy look.
"You are afraid? I'm too. This is a feeling, dat I brook.
I can't stop this my fuckin' fear_about_you, and u feel thIs smell, don't know what to do.
I don't want to kill u, cause I'm not a DeviL.
But simile to me, you are on lowest level. But I must to kill u, cause u not respect me.
I'll heart all stupid bitches, who will touch or heart me! GET OUT OF here! SUCKER! I have a sharp knife!
Get out of here! If u don't wanna die!I'm A Blackguard and I'm very crazy! I'll murda u! Go! Don't be lazy!
SUCKER! HEY! U get awaaay!!! But I have a gun. YEAH BITH! such a good day."
For all stupid assez who offended my life!
For all muthafuckaz who waited for my dyin'!
NOW I SCREAM u:
"I'M HERE 2 KILL, Cause IN THIS WORLD I FOUND A WAY 2 SURVIVE!"
U think u are gangsta??? U are sucka! Cause gangsters don't hide in the back of the friend!
U pussycatdoLL and, u think u are lucky, cause u look for hidin' in this stupid land!
U try cnock down my сharacter? It's incorrectly way! Some fuckerz splited on my had
BUT I KEEPED TO STAY! I SMELL A DEATH! I CAME FROM HELL! TO TAKE U WITH ME! AND U WILL BLAZE VERY WELL!
FORGET ME!
If u don't wanna die.
FORGET ME!
If u want to survive.
FORGET ME!
I'll cut u in slicez!
FORGEET MMMEEEE!
This is your last trisez!
Do u feel??? DO U FEEL THIS NOISE???
The death is comin' to u!
u FEAR THIS VOICE!!
It speaks to u "now I'll pierce your body."
No way to escape. No way to hide behind somebody.
And now... Now u are little rat! Why u don't proud???
Ok. I'll wait. WHAT??? U wanna get out of this place???
No! Once in your life u must feel a pain!
One by one! STAY AND DON'T WAIT!
This fuckin' world wanted to exhaust my life!
And U WANTED humiliate me and U TRYED!
BUT I SURVIVED! YOUR PRICE IS ONE DYNE!
U DIDN'T HERE THE PEOPLE'S CRYING!
[2 lil' points].text (а вот это, пожалуй, мой самый грусный текст, но вообще это просто стихи)
What can I do?
When coffin is cost too expensive.
When I feel a pain in my brain more intensive.
When I can not go anywhere to alive.
When this kind of people is stated to die.
What can I do?
When in the cold rainy night
I drag my friend's corpse, finding the hide.
Only one lil' place on desolate churchyard.
No place to go. I am discard.
What can I do?
When I drive in a wooden cross.
When I'm crying, and think that my life is lost.
When my prayer is just only bout one.
"live" and "death" understood - like a pun!
What can I do?
When my best friend dead.
It was all of my life.
My had full of lead.
Now I lost all.
I will not survive.
I see a wooden cross and I begin cry.
What can I do?
A drawn knife.
A vein full of blood.
The hit is rife.
Heart is pulsing more slow.
The hell is waiting me.
That is all. I know.
