| St.Yoбарь
Сообщения: 2,050
Регистрация: 05.12.2005 Откуда: Калининград | 
5 декабря 2006, 00:46
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#7 (ПС)
| kormega
Rhyme/wordplay/onomatopoeia: 9/10
Topic relevance/composition/plot: 9/10
Overall impression/X-factor: 10/10
Total: 28/30
An eye-rhyme, lousy grammar, stuttering rhythm. Versatile content, enjoyable rhymes overall – the effort to make a good text is evident.
Hommie
Rhyme/wordplay/onomatopoeia: 9/10
Topic relevance/composition/plot: 9/10
Overall impression/X-factor: 10/10
Total: 28/30
F@ck, you got me – at times i thought you copy/pasted this text! Let's skip the petty remarks – a good one. Dunno why you pulled out of that battle of ours a while ago 
Antikrit
Rhyme/wordplay/onomatopoeia: 8/10
Topic relevance/composition/plot: 9/10
Overall impression/X-factor: 9/10
Total: 26/30
Good rhythm (as usual), laughable, fresh – with language faults weighing this text down
Lex_from_mX
Rhyme/wordplay/onomatopoeia: 8/10
Topic relevance/composition/plot: 9/10
Overall impression/X-factor: 8/10
Total: 25/30
Sloppy spelling, good composition, witty lines – you're funny and creative as usual.
demise
Rhyme/wordplay/onomatopoeia: 10/10
Topic relevance/composition/plot: 7/10
Overall impression/X-factor: 8/10
Total: 25/30
More like a diss, not really a representation. Good idea with double-sounding words, though not all of them coincide.
MC Marshall
Rhyme/wordplay/onomatopoeia: 7/10
Topic relevance/composition/plot: 8/10
Overall impression/X-factor: 8/10
Total: 23/30
Some predictable rhymes, and most rhymes at the end of lines. Kinda lighthearted, but NOT TOO BAD for starters.
kapSIDE
Rhyme/wordplay/onomatopoeia: 5/10
Topic relevance/composition/plot: 6/10
Overall impression/X-factor: 6/10
Total: 17/30
Awkward phrases, dim ideas, bad grammar – with occasional humor being a redeeming factor.
FlanDeR
Rhyme/wordplay/onomatopoeia: 4/10
Topic relevance/composition/plot: 6/10
Overall impression/X-factor: 5/10
Total: 15/30
Ahem… let's call it a "rookie jinx". Yoda-style is mad funny, though 
2 all: damn it's hard to ref a battle when you've battled together or made friends with most of the contenders  a good round full of surprises… the first one is that this round is THAT good. Hommie – you surprised the sh!t out of me, keep on. One personal note: get rid of the "nigga" in your rhymes. F@ck what you hear in rap – this was and still is perceived as a racist term by black people. Don't be ignorant mo-fos.
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