Steello a.k.a. Marowak
Rhymes: 4/10
Plot: 4/10
Overall impression: 4/10
"I hope it will take away my mind and allow me tell you true about that’s the Way
what lies under me."
That was enough! First learn to spek English, then read and write English, and only then rhyme English. Plot is better but not much. And, guess what, I'm not impressed with your text at all.

Mozzy
Rhymes: 8/10
Plot: 9/10
Overall impression: 9/10
Just one more good text.

Demise
Rhymes: 7/10
Plot: 8/10
Overall impression: 8/10
Pretty good text BUT next time try to refrain from repetition.

ROCCA
Rhymes: 8/10
Plot: 8/10
Overall impression: 8/10
Not bad. Not bad at all!

M DWELLA
Rhymes: 7/10
Plot: 7/10
Overall impression: 8/10
Work on your rhymes!

Mariachy

Rhymes: 6/10
Plot: 5/10
Overall impression: 6/10
Simple rhymes and primitive story.

Hommie
Rhymes: 9/10
Plot: 9/10
Overall impression: 10/10
Yea, that's the way!

kormega
Rhymes: 10/10
Plot: 9/10
Overall impression: 10/10
Looks like the best text to me, no need for comments


Looks like we have some results...

Kormega - 29/30
Hommie - 28/30
Mozzy - 26/30
Rocca - 24/30
Demise - 23/30
M DWELLA - 22/30
Mariachy - 17/30
Steello a.k.a. Marowak - 12/30