My name is Денис. I am 20 years old. I live in Russian city Нижневартовск , Tumen'sk region , Ханты-Мансийского автономного округа (незнаю я как Автономный округ перевести). I was born in 1981 , in city Vaymer , German's Democratic Republic, my family was millitary persons. In 1999 I joined Russian amy where served in artillery. After the army I went to work for deparmet of internal affiars in our city. In 2001 I started my study in South Ural State University , department of law.


наверное примерно так .... скажи пусть еще через два слова добавляет "U know What I am Saying ?" это должно сгладит разрывы в предложениях и ошибки в граматики