The most unusual thing i ever stole? a snowman.
Midnight. he looked magnificent; a tall, white mute
beneath the winter moon. i wanted him, a mate
with a mind as cold as the slice of ice
whitin my own brain. i started whith the head.

Better off dead than giving in, not taking
what u want. he weighed a ton; his torso,
frozen stiff, hugged to my chess, a fierce chill
piercing my gut. part of the thrill was knowing
that the children would cry in the morning. life's tough.

Sometimes i steal things i don't need. i joy-ride cars
to nowhere, break into houses just to have a look.
I'm a mucky ghost, leave a mess, maybe pinch a camera.
I watch my gloved hand twisting the doorknob.
A stranger's bedroom. mirriros. i sigh like this - Aaah.

It took some time. reassembled in the yard,
he didn't took the same. i took a run
and booted him. again. again. my breath ripped out
in rags. it seems daft now. then i was standing
alone amongst lumps of snow, sick of the world.

Boredom. mostly i'm so bored i could eat myself,
one time, i stole a guitar and thought i might
learn to play. i nicked a bust of Shakespeare once,
flogged it, but the snowman was the strangest.
you don't understand a word i'm saying, do you?

are there any english-speaking men

кста, в тексте опечатка! mirriros.=mirrors

вроде всё

мне это не понять.... ну только если часок за словарем посидеть

-Цитата от danili4

мне это не понять.... ну только если часок за словарем посидеть

эхх

It's quite alright! I did'nt understand every word, but I got the idea. The only strange thing to me is how can U steal a snowman in October? Or U live in the North?

One more hint- you should entitle your topics this way: Author's Nickname- Poem Title.

-Цитата от pipdogg

It's quite alright! I did'nt understand every word, but I got the idea. The only strange thing to me is how can U steal a snowman in October? Or U live in the North?

One more hint- you should entitle your topics this way: Author's Nickname- Poem Title.

it's only my insane fantasy
so don't pay much attention...

about the name of the topic - ooops i can't rename it... already..(

-Цитата от pipdogg

I did'nt understand every word, but I got the idea.

the most important thing - have u found a piece of humor in this text??
it defines have you get the idea or not

Well, I'm not sure about the piece of humor, but I could figure out that U are stealing things attracted not by their material value but by the rush U feel in the process of the theft...

-Цитата от pipdogg

It's quite alright! I did'nt understand every word, but I got the idea. The only strange thing to me is how can U steal a snowman in October? Or U live in the North?

One more hint- you should entitle your topics this way: Author's Nickname- Poem Title.

The same. It seems hard to me just to follow.. I'm far from fluent use of English. What can I post here?.. Congratulations, author: U wrote a text in English.. Not bad..

-Цитата от pipdogg

Well, I'm not sure about the piece of humor, but I could figure out that U are stealing things attracted not by their material value but by the rush U feel in the process of the theft...

no... it's not the same idea i wanted to show(
but your is quite interesting to)) i'll think about it

-Цитата от Табу Богг

The same. It seems hard to me just to follow.. I'm far from fluent use of English. What can I post here?.. Congratulations, author: U wrote a text in English.. Not bad..

merci beaucoup)))

Could you reveal your ideas about this poem?

хуясе...
эт не для средних умов...
а я уже было обрадывался чё-нить новенькое почитать...